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Ïîâèëèêà

Íýéë
                                        Âåòåð.
                                    Íàâåðíîå, áûë îí áåñïóòíûì.
                                                  Âåñåë,
                                              Èñêðèñòûì ñèÿþùèì óòðîì
                                                                Ñâåòîì
                                           Èãðàÿ, ðåçâèëñÿ íà âåòêàõ,
                                                                                Ëåòîì,
                                                         Êîãäà ðàñöâåòàëà ïëàíåòà.
                                                                                             Ãäå-òî,
                                                                               Ãäå ñïàëè äóáû âåêîâûå
                                                                                                    Âåäàë
                                                                                              Çàâåòíûå ñíû ëóãîâûå
                                                                                                      Ïðÿíû
                                                                   Ïîëåé àðîìàòû-äóðìàíû
                                                                                             Ïüÿíî
                                                    Êðóæèëñÿ è ïàäàë â áóðüÿíû.
                                                                                          Áåñîì
                                                            Ëåòåë, êóðîëåñèë ïî âåñÿì,
                                                                                                    Ïåñíè
                                                                          Ñïëåòàÿ áåð¸çîâûì êîñàì.
                                                                                                             Â âûñè
                                                                             Êóïàëñÿ â ðåêå ïîäíåáåñíîé,
                                                                                                            ïë¸ñàõ,
                                                                         Â çåë¸íî-ìàëèíîâûõ ðîñàõ.
                                                                                               Ðîññûïü
                                                                                   Èç êðàñî÷íûõ ðàäóæíûõ áëèêîâ,
                                                                                        Ðîñ ñàä
                                                                              Çà ëåñîì äàë¸êèì è áëèçêèì.
                                                                            Ðîçàì,
                                                        Ïèîíàì, òþëüïàíàì, ãâîçäèêàì
                                                                                       Ïóòíèê
                                                             Çàí¸ñ ñåìåíà ïîâèëèêè.
                                                                                            Äèêèõ
                                                                               Ïðîñòîðîâ áåñïå÷íàÿ äî÷êà
                                                                                      Ïàëà
                                                                              Ñëåçàìè ñèðåíåâîé íî÷è,
                                                                       Ïëà÷åì
                                     Ëåãëà ãèàöèíòó íà ïëå÷è
                                                             Ðå÷üþ
                 Íåæäàííî-íåãàäàííîé âñòðå÷è.
                                                           Ðå÷êîé
                                         Ïîáåãàìè-ñòðóéêàìè ëàñêè
                                                            Ñî÷íî
                                                Ñâèâàëà ÷óäåñ ñíû è ñêàçêè:
                                                                     Çíàé æå
                                                                 Ñîêðûòóþ ìðàêîì ñòîëåòèé
                                                                               Òàéíó
                                                                   È ïàìÿòü ïðîøåäøèõ ñî_öâåòèé.
                                                                                         Êðîâüþ
                                                                                          Òâîåé íàïèòàþòñÿ ïëåòè,
                                                                                                Áîëüþ
                                                                             È ãîðå÷üþ ðàäîñòü îïëàòèøü.
                                                                                                       Ïëàòüå
                                                                 Ìî¸ ñòàíåò ðîçîâî-áåëûì,
                                                                                             Òåëî –
                                                                                 Òâîåé óòîìë¸ííîþ ïëîòüþ.
                                                                                                    Ïëåííèê
                                                                                  Òû ñòàíåøü ìîëèòü ïîâèëèêó –
                                                                                                               Ëåéñÿ
                                                                                        Êàê ñàìàÿ ñëàäêàÿ ïåñíÿ.
                                                                                                          Âåéñÿ
                                                                         Ïî ñòåáëÿì è ëèñòüÿì è – ñìåéñÿ!
                                                                                      Êàþñü –
                                                  ß òîëüêî òîáîé óòîëÿþñü.
                                                             Ëåòîì,
                           Êîãäà ðàñöâåòàëà ïëàíåòà,
                                                          Ãäå-òî
                                            Ñëó÷èëàñü èñòîðèÿ ýòà.
                                                               Ñòðàííî
                                          Çàïóòàë âñå íèòè è ñåòè
                                                               Ñòðàííèê,
                                                    Áåñïå÷íûé çàîáëà÷íûé
                                                                 Âåòåð.
                                                                     ♥
  
  
  
  
  
  


Ðåöåíçèè
Íàïèñàòü ðåöåíçèþ
ÀÀÀÀÀÀÀÀ!!!!!!! âîò îíà åùå âîò îíà! ÿ åå ïîéìàë çà õîâñòèê îòêðûâ ïî òîé òâîåé ññûëêå:

http://www.stihi.ru/rec.html?2010/12/17/1497

ýòó ãèïåðññûëêó íà "ñîðíÿê". íè÷åãî ñåáå ñîðíÿê! êàê áû åå íàçâàòü... ýòî åùå ýòî óæå íå òîëüêî òåêñò, îí æèâîé, îí èçâèâàåòñÿ! ýòî íå êàðòèíêà ê òåêñòó! êàðòèíêà íåïîäâèæíà. à îí ñîçäàåò îùóùåíèå äâèæåíèÿ. ñàì òåêñò. è íå èñêóññòâåííî, íå ïðèäóìêàííî à åñòåñòâåííî à òîëüêî ýòîò òåêñò! ñîðíÿê? íå, ýòî ÇÌÅÉ!!! òåêñò-çìåé. ÷óð ìåíÿ ÷óð ìåíÿ)))) è ýòî íå ïðîñòî íàòóæíî ÷òîá ñîðèãèíàëüíè÷àòü çàïèñàíî â êðóæî÷åê èëè êâàäðàòèê. îíà ðåàëüíî ÈÇÂÈÂÀÅÒÑß!!! âîò çìåÿ! )))

äà-à-à--à-à âîò ýòî èíôîðìàöèÿ ê ðàçìûøëåíèþ... âî ñïàñèáà.

Ñåðæàíò Ïåïåë   17.12.2010 04:57     Çàÿâèòü î íàðóøåíèè ïðàâèë
Äîáàâèòü çàìå÷àíèÿ
))) ñïàñèáî ) ñàìîé íðàâèòñÿ ))

Î÷àðîâàòåëüíàÿ Êîáðî÷êà   17.12.2010 12:17   Çàÿâèòü î íàðóøåíèè ïðàâèë
äà, ýòî áûëî ñóïåð. íî åñëè áû íå ñìûñë è íàñòðîåíèå â òîé òâîåé çìåå, ôèã áû îíà èçâèâàëàñü.

"ó êàæäîé æåíùèíû äîëæíà áûòü çìåÿ.
ýòî áîëüøå ÷åì òû ýòî áîëüøå ÷åì ÿ"

(Ñ)Áîðèñ Ãðåáåíùèêîâ, ïåñòíÿ.

)))

Ñåðæàíò Ïåïåë   17.12.2010 14:13   Çàÿâèòü î íàðóøåíèè ïðàâèë
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