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looking for something special...

Маликита
looking for something special
in ordinary things
and behind everyone's backs
look for white wings

let the sun in your heart
let the delight in your eyes
let me make you smile
i believe, yoou can realize.

sunny, bright morning
like your today's mood
there is no time to be bored
when life is so good.

i hopelessly in love
with every breath and heartbeat
i'm tireless and liv
and i have magic in the fingers.

you don't know about me
but it's not prevent me to sing
i can fly in the sky with doves
and forget about human's greed.

if you are afraid of something
only tell yourself "believe"
that someone very mighty
hidden in your sleeves.


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Nice passionate song. I'm looking always for smth special too.

I liked this: i can fly in the sky with doves

4th passage: I'm tireless and alive/lively or live[i]?

I can fly in the sky with doves,
I can feed them from both hands,
I can touch'em without gloves,
With my wind, with my own sense.

Ольга Ульянкина   27.03.2007 14:46     Заявить о нарушении правил
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Thank you.
This is my first song on English.
I know English a little but I decide to try. (:
4th passage. That means "alive".
I like Your quatrain.)

Маликита   02.04.2007 23:52   Заявить о нарушении правил
For the first song in English it's pretty good. I guess it's better not to know the language to pick nice word combinations. My quatrain has become a full song too just yesterday's night. Thanks to you.
Best Regards,

Ольга Ульянкина   03.04.2007 21:34   Заявить о нарушении правил
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