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Wings

Vlanes
An angel leaves his wings
on the top of the watch-tower,
they crumble and flow downwards
like flakes of snow.

A demon leaves his wings
at the base of the watch-tower,
they amass, don't rise upwards,
but, like threaded mist, spread low.

A human weaves his wings
from mist and snow,
grey wings, with subdued resplendence
and ashen glow.

They keep him above the dust
and below the crushing lips of stars,
not too light to be forgotten,
not too dark to become a burden.


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The presence of wings does not necessarily ensure the gift of flight, the presence of Faithful Heart - does. To achieve their wings angels first must deign to walk among men. To achieve their wings mortals must deign to believe that they walk with angels.

Мге   22.11.2009 01:13     Заявить о нарушении правил
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Well... OK.

Vlanes   22.11.2009 02:06   Заявить о нарушении правил
I was hoping for a broader and more elaborate answer, Dear Author. Still your poem is stunning beyond the eloquence of verbal praise! Your vision is peerless…
With gratitude,
Mithrandir

Мге   25.11.2009 04:53   Заявить о нарушении правил
Thank you very much indeed. Metaphysical visions cannot be compared.

Vlanes   26.11.2009 14:32   Заявить о нарушении правил
I humbly bow in the presence of thy greatness o Sage! Thy visions are peerless!

Мге   02.12.2009 05:29   Заявить о нарушении правил
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