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Like the King of Babylon

Vlanes
Like the King of Babylon
who sits on the throne,
his massive crown
suspended on two chains

above his shaven head
covered with a silken cloth,
lest it falls and crushes
the omnipotent lord

with its pearls and gold
and silver clusters of grapes
and gems of every kind
set in pure iron frames –

so I bear this world
of precious heavy dreams
hanging above my head
on two sky-bound chains:

a black chain
made of shame and woe
and a white one
made of peace and joy.

My neck would break
if either chain gave an inch –
one of them has a weak link,
I don't know which.


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That link is your spirit, a link that unites both chains in a circle of Life Eternal. The link is not weak, it simply requires balance.

Мге   20.04.2011 05:37     Заявить о нарушении правил
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You are absolutely right, as always.

Vlanes   20.04.2011 15:46   Заявить о нарушении правил
Well, I’ve pondered your poem deeply and the abovementioned response came to me. Your poem is more like a vision. Breathtaking is not an adjective that may suffice here. Great power conferred upon the ruler of one’s spiritual empire implies even greater responsibility to be worthy of a throne where light never fails while darkness never prevails. That balance is the scepter and the mark of the true king.

Мге   21.04.2011 03:58   Заявить о нарушении правил
Yes, it is indeed so.

Vlanes   21.04.2011 15:19   Заявить о нарушении правил
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