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The Path to Beauty

Мге
A fragile flame’s caress hath faded in the night,
My heart’s a ravaged nest - no blood in it, no light.
How might I quest for dame, a beauty unattained,
That many sought in vain and lucky few have claimed?
The bronze and marble cold are doomed to waste away,
Ere likeness is bestowed that ages may not slay!
The likeness of her eyes’ akin to starlit veil,
Exceeding any prize, her face – enchanted tale…
Men seek for many dreams, yet apparitions find,
In sooth, few ever claim that beauty deep inside.
That beauty’s hope and faith, love of immortal kind.
Few know its proper place, few Path to Beauty find…

My most profound gratitude to Шерлин Росса for "Красота": http://www.stihi.ru/2010/03/20/7970


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my eyes are closed
I see her beauty's truth
we are, once more - connected.....

not sure if english is your second language, but the command of it that you have is impressive. beautiful poetry about beauty itself. kudos!

Ди Байжанов   01.10.2011 01:56     Заявить о нарушении правил
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To truly see, I close eyes... To truly remember, I write...

Dear Author, English is my second language, though I do not think of languages in that way. Language is the Spirit of all the spirits of men who spoke it in the past and present... By same respect I refrain from calling any language foreign, for all the languages are spoken by people who love and live in many ways similar to ours. If there is any lesson that could be learned from studying philology and etymology of different languages is that there are many more things that unite us, then separate us... Languages are like the spirit-branches of the Great Tree of Life and when we delve for the roots of this tree, we find the true essence of men is Light omnipresent... A part of each of us lives in each of us...

Мге   01.10.2011 02:56   Заявить о нарушении правил
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