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Заранее благодарен, Илья.
I saw myself in your black magic eyes
And whole world shook suddenly extremely.
You were so beautiful, so young and so spice
That I decided look at them more deeply.
And then I saw not only lifeline eyes,
I saw my dreams, my wishes and my pain,
A storm with rainbow...they were nasty nice
I burned there but I'm sure, not in vain.
I knew I'll be a slave, forever yours,
A slave of your so lighten eyes of day!
I knew it was a capture, knew of course...
But looked at them so fearless again.
And now I have to live in prison-house,
I smile sometimes when I dreaming you.
Just wanted make a joke spending hours
But destiny has torn my heart quite few.
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