Моя первая попытка перевести русскую песню на английский. К сожалению, я очень сильно отдалился от оригинала... Но под мотив оригинала спеть можно... Кто владеет англйским на высоком уровне, пожалуйста, подскажите, где я ошибся в грамматике,а где в орфографии...
Remember now!
Your world is lost!
And now your heart
Is in the frost.
And you are ready
To escape,
But now is in your head
The dreams you're never understand.
You can't do anithing whit that!
Whit flash of sanrise in the end
You will find it's fake.
Night gonna take
Your last mistake.
Sky is in dream!
Snow! Snow! Snow!
The winter's over clouds!
Right now your dreams are clear,
That's I know.
Snow! Snow! Snow
Is falling on the ground!
You wanna be with me,
That's I know!
We taking some warm
For our souls,
But it's for really
Not right course.
And we are running
From the sun,
But need to stop run.
The snow will fall right in your heart...
And you will never can to start
To let for your soul make a part.
But snow is sparkling.
Night gonna take
Your last mistake.
Sky is in dream!
Snow! Snow! Snow!
The winter's over clouds!
Right now your dreams are clear,
That's I know.
Snow! Snow! Snow
Is falling on the ground!
You wanna be with me,
That's I know!
The clock is cold now,
Pain has gone.
And you had found that
You was wrong.
But somewhere is
A smoke and peace
And you're must listen
To it, please.
Night gonna take
Your last mistake.
Sky is in dream!
Snow! Snow! Snow!
The winter's over clouds!
Right now your dreams are clear,
That's I know.
Snow! Snow! Snow
Is falling on the ground!
You wanna be with me...
Snow! Snow! Snow!
The winter's over clouds!
Right now your dreams are clear,
That's I know.
Snow! Snow! Snow
Is falling on the ground!
You wanna be with me,
That's I know!
That's I know!
02.11.09