The Dance Under the July Rainbow

Dance for me, my little darling,
Naked, passionate, and hot,
In my soul light wild fire,
You do know, honey, what
I’d prefer on a July morning,
How the nature clears my brain,
How I like a new day dawning,
If we play some fancy game!..

It was rainy an hour earlier,
During the sunrise we got blind,
Your long hair is so curly…
Make me cheerful, satisfied:
Take off now the rest of clothes,
Dance your crazy rock-n-roll
So that animals of the forest
Come to watch such a magic show!

Your appearance under the rainbow
As an amazing fairytale:
Slim long legs and fine wings-elbows,
Try to fly, that’ll be OK!
Please, sit down on the cloud -
It’s too hard to catch you up,
I’m so tired but brave and proud
When I feel such a sweet love's bump!

Where is your little darling,
Naked, passionate, and hot,
May by she is somewhere crying,
Of the blindness you have got?!

I think you''ll take it easyly as a small joke? I 'd never have an experience in my own verses in Eglish, only in translations, but I'll try sometime...And I'd like to have your opinion about my steps here.

Галина Девяткина   04.08.2013 18:06     Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for your nice joke... Frankly, I've burst out laughing!
As to your translations, they're rather interesting.
I usually translate English songs into Russian, but I also have
some experience in the "back translations", but only songs too,
so that everyone can sing them.
Generally I prefer to author verses with my own themes. I don't
like to translate other's verses.
I'm grateful for your attention, Galina!
Sincerely, Vladimir

Владимир Хорошевский   06.08.2013 21:27   Заявить о нарушении
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