Малыш Билли Billy the Kid

Алексей Бурый
Мой первый опыт написания песен на английском, вдохновлялся чем-то вроде Bon Jovi - Wanted Dead or Alive, потому буду рад критике или пожеланиям) Ищу темы для песен)

He is dangerous,
In his charger- six bullets
He's in charge and rules
But he's not a hero.

He is lucky,
He lived under a heavy rain,
His burning hellfire,
But he loved to play.

Billy the Kid,
21 years - 21 deaths!
The legend on streets,
Death comes on his paths!

He is not a god,
The fate threw a dice,
The sky in his eyes
Hand killer's in blood.

Billy the Kid,
21 years - 21 deaths!
The legend on streets,
Death comes on his paths!