Ротор Статор -The boy and girl- Рецензия

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Стих по ссылке - http://www.stihi.ru/2016/07/03/7890

Man, the end of the story is so lame,
The colors are pale, you are to blame
You claim the story is boring
But its glory is still glowing

Man and wife, hand in hand -
Think of them twice against the grain
It`s all twisted like DNA strain
Their loss can be someone`s gain.

Happy moments are measured
In waves of pure pleasure
Not in normal terms and metrics
Life is unpredictable and hectic

The unknown drives people`s hearts,
Not the routine of made up luck
The story of lifelong love is so not true
You speak of it as if you had no clue