Шекспир. Сонет 54. Цветы двух видов

Елизавета Судьина
Насколько красота всегда прекрасней,
когда орнамент Правда ей дает,
Как слаще милой розы ароматность,
когда она свой запах издает.
Но горек яд у язвенных цветов,
настолько же, насколько розы - сладок.
Играй же тщетно с цепкостью шипов,
когда бутоны лето раскрывает.
Их добродетель - только напоказ,
Умрут без уваженья, без ухода,
Смерть для себя. А розы - нет, не так,
Их смерть благоуханна за порогом.
Так же и ты, красавец молодой!
Умрешь - мой стих проявит образ твой.

SONNET 54
O how much more doth beauty beauteous seem,
 By that sweet ornament which truth doth give!
 The rose looks fair, but fairer we it deem
 For that sweet odour which doth in it live.
 The canker-blooms have full as deep a dye
 As the perfumed tincture of the roses,
 Hang on such thorns and play as wantonly
 When summer's breath their masked buds discloses:
 But, for their virtue only is their show,
 They live unwoo'd and unrespected fade,
 Die to themselves. Sweet roses do not so;
 Of their sweet deaths are sweetest odours made:
    And so of you, beauteous and lovely youth,
    When that shall fade, my verse distills your truth.

NOTES

 LIV. This Sonnet continues and expands the sentiment of liii. 14. Beauty is made more beautiful by inward worth. The beauty of the rose is thus enhanced by its sweet odour from within. In this it excels the "canker-blooms," which no one prizes either when they are alive or after they have faded. But roses, fading and dying, yield sweet perfumes. And so, when the beauty of Mr. W. H. passes away, his truth and fidelity will be preserved, "distilled" in the poet's verse.

 8. The canker-blooms have full as deep a dye. If, as seems to be the case, the "canker-bloom" is the dog-rose, then, as Steevens remarks, there is an inconsistency in the statement of the text, since the dog-rose is of a pale colour, and, moreover, is not entirely without odour.

 6. Perfumed tincture of the roses. The roses, with their perfume and colour. "Tincture" is equivalent to the "dye" of the previous line.

 11. Die to themselves. The "canker-blooms" die neglected and unregarded.

 14. Vade. So Q. Dowden, adopting this form, refers to Passionate Pilgrim, x. i, "Sweet rose, fair flower, untimely pluck'd, soon vaded."