Валерий Старков - полученные рецензии

Рецензия на «Я продолжаю рисовать. Эротика» (Валерий Старков)

I keep drawing.

Shall we continue drawing?
for a week...I've been bored...
With a smile, I propose to become:
be by amazing super model...

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Darkness surrounds us...
under you is a silk bed...
Lips like a poppy redden...
chills of desire on your skin...

Just a little touchings:
over your body - palms sliding..
Knees... hips... shoulders... breast...
I'm not tired of the caressing...

I stroke every inch...
and you closed your eyes...
Continue count of their victories,
they generously gave themselves...

And, now, it's time to break
the latest lace cobwebs...
But... maybe enough to draw,
such a revealing picture?

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 22:58   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Вы просите, что б я нарисовал... Легкая эротика» (Валерий Старков)

You ask me to draw...

You ask me to draw
love passion sultry picture?
Please! but it's virtual!
and all is only half serious!

...And so... First, I'll prepare canvas:
silk sheets... of down pillows...
And isn't easy choice of a necklace...
we put the gold rings in ears ...

Wine and fruits... in light twilight...
that's why I draw the curtains...
Suit you so well: purple nail polish,
transparent lace marvelous patterns...

Lipstick stroke, and you can draw:
you're in silks... with a filled glass...
But the look begins to burn with fire -
with a long-unseen glow!

In a steel embrace, enclosing a vise,
by investing all the strength, not half,
I feel swollen nipples in my chest...
I taste sweet raspberries on my lips ...

Kissing the silk of perfumed hair,
I will tip you gently on your back ...
But, honey, answer the question:
what about draw painting next?

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 21:46   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Две родинки Эротика» (Валерий Старков)

Two moles ... Erotica

Mole on your nipple
I lightly touch by my lips...
Golden strand at a temple
smells like fragrant flowers...

You are tired, stretched out, lying...
stars go out at the end of night...
Recklessness, dear, forgive me?
and kiss gently-gently your eyes...

Your fingers touched my chest...
there is also a mole mark ....
Unearthly caress reward:
you're a witch, even a coquette...

... Again, a wonderful moment of love!
we're in the arms of a sensual circle!
Inflaming the wild heat in the blood,
our moles touching each other...

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 20:34   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Испытание страстью» (Валерий Старков)

Passion test.

I immediately loved you... smooth skin...
impeccable body... and just like that once:
I put you on a love bed... unreducing...
with admiration... the flaming eyes...

My fingers slid, quite skillfully,
gently and carefully you need to caress...
And your body writhed under my caresss...
you've begun to moan lightly already...

And I was, perhaps, at the peak of bliss,
waiting for a wonderful, enthusiastic trice...
And I swear I didn't know perfection itself
I'd turned this fairy tale into a cry of despair...

That your beauty is just a trap...for senses...
for the naive and stupid - an iron trap...
That love for you is a toy, and just fun...
a cruel dop... and a crazy mind...

Why the gods didn't come up with a cure,
would madmen from passionate love heal?
Why expect, as a result, ordeal?
and, alas, you need to blame only yourself?

Why if you love - it will always hurt?
does suffering cleanse our hearts?
And, loving, we burn... always voluntarily...
and ready to suffer for love without end ...

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 20:08   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Я хотел бы стать кружевом» (Валерий Старков)

I'd like to become lace: fine calico
I would touch your skin a little...
I'd enjoy whole day, and not hiding
wrapped around of your girlish breast.

Or maybe by a black fishnet stocking,
on the thigh, barely audible, slide...
Run on slender legs with a chill,
it's not easy, if it wouldn't slip away.

I still fit fashional light, gentle silk,
and such that others can't find...
I'd lay down with a bright attire...
and tremblingly could... you think?..
caress you from shoulders to feet...

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 19:27   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Подари мне пожалуйста Ночь» (Валерий Старков)

Please give me this night.

Please give me this night...
I'd like to drown in your gaze...
Kissing your silky strands...
fleeing from doubt away...

This Night be the sweet trice...
I will fulfill all your wishes...
Delight of adoration... not hide...
bend of the body, in passion cry ...

The stars will twinkle in sky...
and shyly moon will turn away...
Playfully shadows dance on wall...
I won't stop kissing you...

Hot flame... of passionate love
I warm your heart with my breath...
Only recklessly... I'll could love...
and don't drive me away...

You're tired? don't wanna burn?
I'd like to help you to flare up...
Give this Wonderful Night...
and then... I'm ready to die...

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 18:51   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Я буду пить тебя по капле» (Валерий Старков)

I will drink you drop by drop...

I will drink you drop by drop...
no fuss and no rush...
You'll like it? or it is not?
Close your eyes, don't breathe...
giving Wonderful Moments
I will burn with a flame of Love...
Feeling the gentle breeze...
and unbearable heat in blood...

I'll be sparingly - by a grain of sand
caress your naked breast...
You're more graceful than a reed,
I want to whisper in your ear...
And barely audible touch,
and loving every millimeter...
Breathing in pleasure
I crave you...

And you melt like an ice cube...
can't hold back the sweet moan...
And there will be, a drop, a tear
tremble in velvet eyelashes...
And the heart beats barely audibly...
you really believed me...
And happiness will rise to the sky...
but ... enough dreams for today ...

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 18:08   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Твои волосы пахнут свежестью Эротика» (Валерий Старков)

Your hair smells fresh...

Your hair smells fresh...
enough to be - impregnably strict ...
I kiss your lips for a long time...
with ardent tenderness...
And I touch your back with my palms...

Lips... Neck... Now for the buttons...
it's from the shoulders slipped...
falling on the floor, a white blouse...
Nipples sparkled - like the pearls...
today you are very timid ...

I kiss your breast... can hardly breathe...
and my palms slide around your waist...
My heart beats... it's heard quietly...
from outrageous anomalies...

Now on arms... and on the sheets...
I've been dreaming for you so long...
From you, I heard only wrong words,
in wait dreams... basked only with you...

I'm not in a hurry... I hug carefully...
and kisss... it's time for the main thing...
Feelings are tender and boundless...
my dear!.. I love you very much!..

I dissolve in you... we're merging...
sounds subsided... fire of movement...
And the galaxies suddenly explode!
we both collapse in exhaustion...

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 17:51   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Я далеко зайду в мечтах Эротика» (Валерий Старков)

Fall asleep and don't wake up.

I will go far in my dreams...
I want to sleep and not wake up...
It's time, at least in words
To touch you immodestly ...

And strip everything from you...
And kiss the body with a kiss ...
And a long, long kiss:
Chest, shoulders, buttocks, hips...

And, silently, hands up...
And put you on your back...
And strip it all off...
And to prove that I am a man ...

I would stroke silk hairs ...
And you would unclench your knees ...
I would carefully enter you ...
As in a scabbard - a dagger blade ...

And you would melt in the fire -
Like hot plasma...
And gave me happiness
Crawling in a sweet orgasm...

And you - as if for the first time:
take caresses with your whole body...
What will happen next? Not now,
But you will definitely know...

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 16:29   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Музыка Любви. Эротика» (Валерий Старков)

When we light the fire together
dancing, timidly, flame on the logs...
And only I will know:
my knees beat with tremor nervous...
With you, alone, I finally glow...
as wax candles... wish bride crown:
I put my hands on your shoulders...

Then, to myself, I will gently attract
and kiss your sensual lips...
Our shadow flies the ceiling across...
to meet me, you'll slip out of your fur coat...
Now I will kiss your neck ...
and inhale smells of blissfully spirits...
I kiss your sweet lips again...
we'll completely dissolve in feelings...

And then the blouse, silently, unbutton...
in the fireplace, a scarlet ember smokes...
And I'll completely take off your blouse...
But, I won't rush after that...
I won't strip you right away...
I want to make beautiful moments...
you will tremble... from kisses...
like alder leafs from wind breath...

To gently kiss your earlobe,
I'll take off, slowly, your earring...
And again, here's a sweet moment:
on the bra, I will unfasten the clasp...
As with a light brush I apply strokes...
drawing all from trifles to essence...
I'll gently kiss your rose nipples...
I'll stroke small breasts with my palm...

And I won't take off you my loving eyes...
And you'll melt all in sweet tenderness...
What will happen next? It's not now...
but later, you will definitely find out...

Леди Лучик   09.06.2022 23:40   •   Заявить о нарушении