Леди Лучик - написанные рецензии

Рецензия на «искушение... сказки Шахерезады...» (Папины Сказки)

Your gentle voice ... oh, my Scheherazade! ..
captivated by charm... and by sensery soul...
Standing alone... in depths... of misty garden...
and ventle warmth flows from your eyes...

The flame speeches... of endless delight...
and body odor... turned all into a mirage...
Fireworks magma... exciting the heart...
you won’t see... where's whim? where's truth?..

Quivering shadow... creeps...lies down...
lunar walks... by adoration all bewitched...
In a crazy heart... torn onto parts...
everything is exciting... enticing by life...

It is unable to resist the temptation...
covered with silk... with luminaries pearls...
But at dawn... you've to part with obsession...
mirage dissolved... white light is uninvite ..

Shadows covered trees... the edge of garden ...
from fairy tale of life.. descends in the world...
Wonderful feelings... of beautiful ballad...
speeches of tender dreams... of flowing ampir ..

Леди Лучик   07.07.2022 12:43   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Меж Небом и Землёй...» (Папины Сказки)

Between heaven and earth... a line was born...
the world of dreams?.. filling up to the limit...
Sometimes soul in a hurry... your arms thrilling...
and boldly denies... what it hurts again...

Gray fogs are nonsens... they rise like rocks...
rush of despair... and the bitterness of defeat...
Salvation from troubles... by path is leading...
to the dome of heaven... of divine visions...

Where hearts beat... cold of eternal torment...
where's sparks of love... among the touchings...
Path of life sciences... it's suddenly sobering...
the hope of love?.. or reality of phenomena?..

Леди Лучик   05.07.2022 03:05   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Дыханьем Грёз...» (Папины Сказки)

Breath of dream... appeared in your dreams...
circled like a cloud... in the calling distance...
Rushed like a whirlwind... call of your love...
gave me strength... taking away my sorrows...

Overcoming space... lots of kilo-miles...
so endlessly hanging over the world...
Hugging its shoulder.... and cuddling gently...
I will whisper again in my impulse... my dear...

How nice it is to be with you... waking up...
catch your star look from under eyelashes...
Catching lips... your sweet smile...
like intoxicated wine... eagerly to drink it...

Touching your lips... merging into a kiss...
you continue your wandering in a fit...
You slide through body like flame... and it's hot...
caress every part of it... carefully...

Whispering... running along the wave...
drawn... a gust of passion... inspired...
Embracing my body... sinking... into...
the pool of eyes... kiss... hug... flying away...

Леди Лучик   30.06.2022 05:37   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Те Чувства просто Заблудились...» (Папины Сказки)

Those feelings just got lost... in a life...
in awful warps of time... space... inopportunely...
Suddenly revived again... their flight... suddenly...
accused of inconstancy... for a long time...

Once upon a time... kindred spirits met... couldn't
live without happiness... without ardent love...
Warmed solar warmth.. it's not clear... because
of something suddenly parted... to meet later...

But curve of time... again didn't fit... with axes...
coplanar measurements... out of dates time...
Random dates... sudden... like a blow of fate...
like thunder from heaven... opening space...

How steep on cliffs... this meeting froze... joy...
gave tender... heavenly warmth... not for long...
It went on... a trice of bliss... emotions spliced...
warmed by fire of flight... but time parted again...

Sad memory... surging wave emerges... brings
warmth... ruthlessly aching for the whole soul...
Violent memories excite... at abyss of feelings...
faithful dog... so lonely, dumbfounded curled up...

Леди Лучик   29.06.2022 21:38   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Слеза от Счастья...» (Папины Сказки)

Tear of happiness... ran down by cheeks...
I catch your breath... closing my eyes...
I'm trying to guess... making a wish...
to fulfill it ... you really want ...I'll help...

Your smile... subtly flying... like a wave...
touched the ends of hair... merging gently...
Feeling of warmth... suddenly sparkled...
with light... slipped by a ray... drowned again...

In the depths of the surging wave... went out...
glare of luna shining... and light of happiness...
Quietly ran... thrilling down back... again...
reflected... in deep mirror... from looking glass...

Light of fire is streaming... lit in the breast...
sparkled by rainbow... playing... gently fading...
On subtle strings... of your quivering soul...
like an echo of unearthly feeling... reflected...

Declaration of love... stuck in diamond of tears...
a fairy tale of happiness... reigned in the sky...
As a sign of revelation... of twinkling stars...
like a breath... like a ghost of dreams...
like an echo of words...

Леди Лучик   29.06.2022 20:12   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «На лучиках Волшебного Заката...» (Папины Сказки)

On the rays of a magical sunset... a song flew...
quivering love... touching carefully the face...
Caressing gently... flowing over the skin...
enveloping... with passion... and taking us...
to the expanses of happiness...

I catch your gaze... and fly away into space...
woven from your feelings... and spunky words...
How sweet to feel... their gentle touchings...
plunging into foam of scarlet clouds... love...

Flutters over the wave... the flying melody...
of supplication... intertwined with its pattern...
with the sea... of flaming feelings...
Soaring over horizon of snow-white mountains...
it'll be impossible forget.. warmth of your hot lips ...

Carries in abyss... plunging in pool...of shining eyes...
oh, how captivating sounds... of your wish song...
Words are flowing... frozen like a gentle cloud...
from dawn up to sunset... with its light warms...
the tenderness of the sea... of love...

Леди Лучик   27.06.2022 22:06   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Любовь...» (Папины Сказки)

Love is a life... when it is mutual...
when, like the sea... splashes at your feet ...
Love is death... when it is naive...
deceived... captured... by pleasures flesh...

Love is a dream... when wrapped in a wave...
caresses... plunging everything into a mirage...
Love is a groan... when hearts are confusing...
throws ... into a gloomy empty courage ...

Love is reality... when it unexpectedly came..
changed pictures... dreams fairy tale became...
Love is like an ulcer... a very burning wound...
walked through the heart... by stripe of tears...

Леди Лучик   27.06.2022 19:47   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Опять...» (Папины Сказки)

Again... you touch with a wave...
breath warming... in cyan space...
Do not lose!.. a new moments...
minutes of love... resurrected...

All tenderness... prickly gilding...
source of secret dreams...deceit...
Net... entangled like honeycombs...
excitement of bliss... from fairy tale...

It's out of inspiring hope...
the cycle... entered the world...
Giving... freshness of the sunrise...
in flying rainbow... intertwining...

Patterns... a vivid embodiment...
painted... the mystery pattern...
Rapprochement... burns shadows...
penetrated in soul... passion gaze...

Леди Лучик   27.06.2022 19:15   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сначала...» (Папины Сказки)

Oh, if I knew!.. that I was loved...
you were... all these years...
Resurrected image... from the routine...
days gone away... out of bad weather...

From silent dreams... from forgiveness...
from our long-awaited meeting...
From ardent lips... from sensations...
from clasped arms.. like a ring...

Of course... all hopes are stupid...
wearily glimmer... in a silence...
It's thrilling... corpses living...
they stupidly look... in a face...

Believing in feelings ... deceived...
so bitter... pity - did not stick ...
In hot dreams... be back to you...
to forget... to start all over again ...

Леди Лучик   27.06.2022 18:31   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Улыбка» (Оленин Александр)

Улыбка Мона Лизы?.. не ошибка...
пронизана теплом лучистых глаз...
И в уголочках рта, загнутых гибко...
застыла...неподдельная слеза...

Кураж?.. мираж?..волнение улыбки...
тревожит... род людской года...
Пронзают холст...пульсируюшим ритмом...
пытаясь разгадать... загадку дня... :)

PS: Леонардо возил портрет Мона Лизы всё время с собой..
в футляре... он им очень дорожил!.. при исследовании этой картины- обнаружили... что толщина мазков краски составляет несколько микрон!.. такой утончённой работы - больше нет нигде в нашем мире!.. можно пофантазировать.. что в те времена были лазерные принтеры?..:)

Леди Лучик   25.06.2022 22:40   •   Заявить о нарушении