Рецензия на «No dreaming available at the moment» (Elsie)
This piece, though camouflaged with an inept caption, feels a great deal better than most poems in your first batch. Looks like some water has flown under the bridge between then and now. Still, a spell-check is strongly advised. Mahalingam 15.11.2003 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for your comments!
Actually writing poems in English feels more like a words game for me, not following the moods (as I usually do if I write in Russian). This one is an exception. Haven't found any spelling errors though :) Elsie 20.11.2003 18:15 Заявить о нарушении
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