Рецензия на «So, you re in love» (Ронни Фоксова)
I must agree with the preceding speaker that this piece of poetry is really something outstanding and its rhythm is the thing that strikes most. Anyway there seems to be a certain number of spelling mistakes which can’t of course spoil the general impression. They've build a tunnel - built Of quickly patring adolescence – parting? a drop of sence? - sense A couple pence she costed. - Cost – irregular verb Of skattered shadow-like daydream – scattered As for your Spanish poem, its simplicity makes it even nicer. :)) So, thanks for the pleasure you gave me with your poems! Sincerely yours, Ramiro L-T. Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 16.11.2017 16:30 • Заявить о нарушении
many thanks for your feedback and the notes) I must have been too emotional when typing this poem)
will surely return the visit! Best, me Ронни Фоксова 16.11.2017 22:24 Заявить о нарушении
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