Рецензия на «Gingerbread girl» (Ольга Вярси)

I do not like fiction, although poetry consists of all of them. Only they are different, there are condensing reality, but there are, on the contrary, smearing to impossibility. What do you think your text is much better to put? Maybe next to this? Just kidding..!
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if you are wheezing (by accident)
suddenly you go to another world
only still (by accident)
you (still) still alive
vigilantly look-look
intently (to pain)
to the wall like a spider
transparent tear
all cha-a-a-net spider web
weaver - do not tear your eyes
spins without looking at the hand
so thirsty
to live a little longer
watch and watch
and you know - here is the road
and the spider invisible tears
you think you’ll pump everything
transparent web, well
a bit, but I’m not bending my legs ...
what? everything? last time?
left web shadow
and kiss and cry.
you can’t drink for a long time
and it’s impossible to poop.
what ahead is not
dead drunk and
(true) very sick?
all right, yes:
earth, earth, earth ...
and wooden cross
and someone's sighs sighs,
Yes, the inscription is stupid,
the size of anapest
and angels like brides
and silent silence of the sky

Владислав Тимчук   17.12.2019 02:51   •   Заявить о нарушении