Лилия Летняя - полученные рецензии
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Рецензия на «А мне» (Лилия Летняя)
Здравствуйте, уважаемая Лилия Николаевна, вот Вам, пожалуйста, ещё:
I don't need in Mays
I don't need in dawn
Nothing doing! To raise!
When I am sleepless till morn!
And I don't need in the day.
Nights are enough for me. I follow
Him like a shadow today
But he is no one's...to my sorrow.
And I need in no instant
And I need in no hour.
My change does live in it.
My fear and risk are now.
And my glance at him, I say,
Is enough.
I've already torn myself away
From hell to life.
4/IX 2015
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 03.09.2015 22:17 • Заявить о нарушении
Здравствуйте, уважаемая Лилия Николаевна, вот Вам, пожалуйста, ещё:
I don't need in Mays
I don't need in dawn
Nothing doing! To raise!
When I am sleepless till morn!
And I don't need in the day.
Nights are enough for me. I follow
Him like a shadow today
But he is no one's...to my sorrow.
And I need in no instant
And I need in no hour.
My change does live in it.
My fear and risk are now.
And my glance at him, I say,
Is enough.
I've already torn myself away
From hell to life.
4/IX 2015
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 03.09.2015 22:17 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Война» (Лилия Летняя)
Уважаемая Лилия Николаевна! Вот Вам,пожалуйста, ещё!
It took millions of persons
And it took away with it the best
Days to nowhere and its hoarse
Whispering is much more worse
Than a cry- it is war's essence.
It takes everything to the lasr
Drop- your closest people and
Wailing of the living will last
For long. There's no way out.
Life sometimes falls to people's lot
At a price. Don't change it for bagatelle.
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 19:25 • Заявить о нарушении
Уважаемая Лилия Николаевна! Вот Вам,пожалуйста, ещё!
It took millions of persons
And it took away with it the best
Days to nowhere and its hoarse
Whispering is much more worse
Than a cry- it is war's essence.
It takes everything to the lasr
Drop- your closest people and
Wailing of the living will last
For long. There's no way out.
Life sometimes falls to people's lot
At a price. Don't change it for bagatelle.
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 19:25 • Заявить о нарушении
Уважаемая Лилия Николаевна!Вот ещё 3 строчки, рано нажал:
And do good while your heart does not
Cease beating once not to fail
In Eternity. That is all.
27/Viii 2015
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 19:30 Заявить о нарушении
And do good while your heart does not
Cease beating once not to fail
In Eternity. That is all.
27/Viii 2015
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 19:30 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Если бы» (Лилия Летняя)
Уважаемая Лилия Николаевна! И это- Вы,уважаемая Лилия Николаевна!
If only every day were like a previous day,
If only every person could be always
Himself. Would I be glad passing by you? I say,
Yes,living my days one after another, of course
As if I took delayed- action poison's course.
No it didn't add any joyness to me. And any instance
Wouldn't become more valuable for me. That thing
That would be dear for me, for instance,
I wouldn't place on ordinariness'
Pedestal, and my true sense's in this.
And if every meal would be like another
One. And if I were the same as I was yesterday.
Nothing would be weighty farther
In this world... And everything would be nonsense.
27/VIII 2015
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 16:16 • Заявить о нарушении
Уважаемая Лилия Николаевна! И это- Вы,уважаемая Лилия Николаевна!
If only every day were like a previous day,
If only every person could be always
Himself. Would I be glad passing by you? I say,
Yes,living my days one after another, of course
As if I took delayed- action poison's course.
No it didn't add any joyness to me. And any instance
Wouldn't become more valuable for me. That thing
That would be dear for me, for instance,
I wouldn't place on ordinariness'
Pedestal, and my true sense's in this.
And if every meal would be like another
One. And if I were the same as I was yesterday.
Nothing would be weighty farther
In this world... And everything would be nonsense.
27/VIII 2015
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 16:16 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «друг» (Лилия Летняя)
Здравствуйте, уважаемая Лилия Николаевна! Это- Вы:
Today the sun is shining brightly,
The day is nice, I am smiling
To all the people. But, my darling,
Where are you? Being lonely
I miss you never noticing
Other people...Taking adversity
With coffee...But not suffering...
But you do know...Futility
Is my lonele life. We will be
Friends for ever. Don't you see?
27/VIII 2015
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 11:55 • Заявить о нарушении
Здравствуйте, уважаемая Лилия Николаевна! Это- Вы:
Today the sun is shining brightly,
The day is nice, I am smiling
To all the people. But, my darling,
Where are you? Being lonely
I miss you never noticing
Other people...Taking adversity
With coffee...But not suffering...
But you do know...Futility
Is my lonele life. We will be
Friends for ever. Don't you see?
27/VIII 2015
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 11:55 • Заявить о нарушении
Уважаемая Лилия Николаевна!
Я допустил одну опечатку- "lonele" Надо читать"lonely", уважаемая Лилия Николаевна!
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 19:54 Заявить о нарушении
Я допустил одну опечатку- "lonele" Надо читать"lonely", уважаемая Лилия Николаевна!
Игорь Топоров-Анастасьев 27.08.2015 19:54 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «13 деревьев» (Лилия Летняя)
Последние две строчки пронимают.
У вас замечательные стихи!
Каренина Ева 10.07.2014 13:00 • Заявить о нарушении
Последние две строчки пронимают.
У вас замечательные стихи!
Каренина Ева 10.07.2014 13:00 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Только вперед, нас много!» (Лилия Летняя)
Позитивненько!Вперед в бой!!!
Наиля Зиганшина 11.04.2012 23:14 • Заявить о нарушении
Позитивненько!Вперед в бой!!!
Наиля Зиганшина 11.04.2012 23:14 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «темно» (Лилия Летняя)
Пусть будет свет, придет рассвет, без света в жизни смысла нет... Удачи в творчестве Лилия!с улыбкой.
Наиля Зиганшина 16.03.2012 00:29 • Заявить о нарушении
Пусть будет свет, придет рассвет, без света в жизни смысла нет... Удачи в творчестве Лилия!с улыбкой.
Наиля Зиганшина 16.03.2012 00:29 • Заявить о нарушении