Рецензия на «B minor» (Эльгиль)
Apologies for intrusion, Elgil. Yet, I offer you my version of your vision :) When the sun is going down, And the world is blurred with dusk I can sense, my dreams surround Mind of mine, in conquest fast. Desperation rocks my soul, I cannot control desire... Ardor feelings take all over, Setting me ablaze, sans fire. There is no one to save me, None but you, who I can trust; I know everything, don't tell me... Come, please comfort me, for once! Though, we'll never be together, I cannot believe it's true - I am cold in darkness scary Burnt to ash, without you. Fern 28.05.2008 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks, interesting version...You live in Britain, right? I can see the difference from American English.
Эльгиль 28.05.2008 19:41 Заявить о нарушении
nope, I never lived in the UK, love London though - perhaps some day, I'll move there, but not in the immediate future :) You?
Fern 31.05.2008 13:41 Заявить о нарушении
interesting...your english is definitely pure british.
i live in NYC. Эльгиль 31.05.2008 21:43 Заявить о нарушении
Sweet! Check this one out then :)
http://stihi.ru/2006/04/19-359 Fern 01.06.2008 13:26 Заявить о нарушении
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