Fern - написанные рецензии

Рецензия на «A Marble Run» (Лиловая Клякса)

Hey there! What a thought-provoking script! Me like!

Fern   12.10.2008 02:27   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «after this forgiveness» (Coscus)

Lame duck ode? ...what have you gotten yourself into? :)

Fern   12.10.2008 02:14   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «До свиданья» (Татьяна Сац)

Ochen' iteresnyi sposob samozaschity :)

Cheers!

Fern   03.10.2008 21:34   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Поговори со мной» (Олеся Вальгер)

He Alice! You've got great talents standing right by your side :) Sinatra & Ray Charles, they sing along with you! :)

If you cannot toss your heart gaily in the ring,
Love me while the moment lingers,
If you cannot cross your heart that I'm everything,
Try at least to cross your fingers.
Talk to me, baby, tell me lies,
Tell me lies as sweet as apple pie.
Whisper you tremble with a wild desire
To light the fire in my eyes.
Tell me I'm marvelous, exaggerate!
Prevaricate if you must.
Just talk to me, baby, soft and low,
Then if you decide it's really so,
Swear you be mine forever, otherwise just talk to me,
And tell me lies, lies, lies, lies,
Great, big, great big lies.

Fern   01.10.2008 16:56   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Жрец» (Нена Яко Нена)

Confessions of the "квадратное сердце" - ! It breaks my brain just to think of it... what a metaphor! Bravissimo! :)

Fern   01.10.2008 02:23   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Каменный канат» (Ирек Дин)

"зелёные травы рады твоей бессоннице" - VERY nice!

Fern   16.09.2008 15:38   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «we are... - for Fern» (Фффеечка)

mindfield your beauty is
coming of songs and moves
hole of a soule it brings
see, ponder, touch, loose

gonner coming as first,
looking for special signs,
donner of all given burst,
drawing the beau-borderlins

shade, of your splender and done
take, on your loosen and seen
come from the beauty within
see off the screen to a screen

Fern   24.07.2008 02:20   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «B minor» (Эльгиль)

Apologies for intrusion, Elgil. Yet, I offer you my version of your vision :)
When the sun is going down,
And the world is blurred with dusk
I can sense, my dreams surround
Mind of mine, in conquest fast.

Desperation rocks my soul,
I cannot control desire...
Ardor feelings take all over,
Setting me ablaze, sans fire.

There is no one to save me,
None but you, who I can trust;
I know everything, don't tell me...
Come, please comfort me, for once!

Though, we'll never be together,
I cannot believe it's true -
I am cold in darkness scary
Burnt to ash, without you.

Fern   28.05.2008 00:12   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Painkiller» (Дориан Лемэль)

Hey, Alex, Here you go!

Fear not, the Rain can’t hurt us (Why Rain is capital --- a god of rain?)
(Let this words? (are you talking about the line above or the whole poem?) become a spell!)
I forgot that we are mortals
On our midnight way? to Hell.

One step closer to damnation
(With each hourglass’s turn.) – still sounds awkward (With each turn of hourglass – be ok)
No god to preach salvation
No time to pray or mourn. ?

Cannot hide and cannot run
(Even if it feels unjust.)
Why thou art the Chosen One?
Seek the answer in thy Past... – don’t get this lines. One usually learns/gets answers from the past, ughm?

Angel's Pact with blood is written
(Oh, the world is *that* insane!)
Here comes the Heaven's Hitman
Bringing Peace in place (instead?) of Pain... (what the angel’s pact has to do with blood and Heaven’s Hitman – are you talking about blood-rain or…?)

Best!

Fern   22.05.2008 21:05   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Безумие красок» (Алессандро Альберио)

Изумительно! Вижу бензиновый развод в луже... или это ЛСД? :)

Fern   22.05.2008 20:28   •   Заявить о нарушении