Рецензия на «How does it feel when life is obscure?» (Лета Гордеева)

Of that body, distructing yourself?
vs
Of that body, distracting yourself?

Destructing???

WHY TO WRITE IN ENGLISH?????

Зус Вайман   09.09.2020 21:17     Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for helping to edit my old poem, but hold your attitude, please.

Лета Гордеева   09.09.2020 21:37   Заявить о нарушении
I am holding my virtual horses, but still...

WHAT FOR?

Зус Вайман   09.09.2020 21:43   Заявить о нарушении
Because there is a freedom of speech and expression in the world that I'm living in, yet my daughter is bilingual and my husband does not speak Russian. Does this answer suit you? I don't give an f to your opinion that one mistake can stop someone from writing, and I'm having a bad day. You could read a few more lines on my page before posting here, eg my last review. I am not on this site currently because I was waiting for your virtual horses to rage here.

Лета Гордеева   09.09.2020 21:51   Заявить о нарушении
TOO MANY MISTAKES IN GRAMMAR AND STYLE.

BECOME A RELATIVE PERFECTIONIST.

AND SHOW YOUR LINES TO A NATIVE SPEAKER

Зус Вайман   09.09.2020 21:56   Заявить о нарушении
My different lines were shown in different times to different proffessionals in literature, all native speakers.

Лета Гордеева   09.09.2020 22:06   Заявить о нарушении
And I have a 100% vision, you don't need a caps lock to talk to me.

Лета Гордеева   09.09.2020 22:10   Заявить о нарушении
My vision is weak

Зус Вайман   09.09.2020 23:12   Заявить о нарушении
Try pressing Ctrl+ on your keyboard to change the screen scale (or Ctrl- if you want it back to small), if you are using a computer.

Лета Гордеева   09.09.2020 23:42   Заявить о нарушении
I am reduced to a tablet, alas...

Зус Вайман   10.09.2020 13:15   Заявить о нарушении
I see. Sorry about your vision. I hope you know how to zoom stuff on your tablet. Not sure if it's possible to download a keyboard with the bigger letters.

Лета Гордеева   10.09.2020 15:19   Заявить о нарушении

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